The campaign was very interesting and the chosen image was very cool. I give you some tips to improve your project:
- View this email address in your browser: the text of this link does not make much sense. If I'm not mistaken, this link will take you to the web version of the mail communication. In that case, you would have to use something like "View in browser" or "View mail in browser", which is also a usability standard.
- The bulk of the content of your newsletter is an image. You must be very careful with this as it can be considered SPAM by mail managers. I recommend that you add a headline and add a short paragraph of text with some explanation about the coupon. Of course, link the image to the web for registration as well, just like the button.
- "Register now" button: it is lost at the end of the content. I would change the use of colors in that block, leaving a white background and a button with a yellow color, rounded edges and a black font, which I have seen is the one you use in your store. The best thing is to follow that same aesthetic in line with the brand identity.
Hope this can help you.
Greetings and congratulations on completing the course!
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nestor_tejero
Teacher PlusHello Monica!
The campaign was very interesting and the chosen image was very cool. I give you some tips to improve your project:
- View this email address in your browser: the text of this link does not make much sense. If I'm not mistaken, this link will take you to the web version of the mail communication. In that case, you would have to use something like "View in browser" or "View mail in browser", which is also a usability standard.
- The bulk of the content of your newsletter is an image. You must be very careful with this as it can be considered SPAM by mail managers. I recommend that you add a headline and add a short paragraph of text with some explanation about the coupon. Of course, link the image to the web for registration as well, just like the button.
- "Register now" button: it is lost at the end of the content. I would change the use of colors in that block, leaving a white background and a button with a yellow color, rounded edges and a black font, which I have seen is the one you use in your store. The best thing is to follow that same aesthetic in line with the brand identity.
Hope this can help you.
Greetings and congratulations on completing the course!
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