Very cool the idea of this communication. I lack context to be able to assess it correctly, but since I am a smart person, I have gossiped on your website;]
I understand that people will receive this email when they subscribe to the newsletter:
If so, my experience tells me that you could be more direct with this email. The value proposition is at the bottom instead of at the top. Perhaps I would shorten the first paragraphs, which are very cool, and upload the download proposal higher. I believe that more people will complete the conversion journey.
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nestor_tejero
Teacher PlusHi Desiree!
Very cool the idea of this communication. I lack context to be able to assess it correctly, but since I am a smart person, I have gossiped on your website;]
I understand that people will receive this email when they subscribe to the newsletter:
https://desireelara.com/suscripcion/
If so, my experience tells me that you could be more direct with this email. The value proposition is at the bottom instead of at the top. Perhaps I would shorten the first paragraphs, which are very cool, and upload the download proposal higher. I believe that more people will complete the conversion journey.
See you soon!
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