Congratulations @betosabroso !
We love to see your work process. Excellent icon development and mockup presentation.
Here are some suggestions:
- Typographic selection lacks hierarchy. As they are fonts applied in such similar sizes and weights, they are perceived as monotonous. We recommend playing with the size and weight of the holders. In this way the reading of the texts will be much more impressive and pleasant.
- You have a wide selection of colors that in the end are not applied in any collateral piece. You will need to make the decision whether it is worth removing them from your color palette or applying them consistently to the application pieces. So that the brand does not lose coherence.
- For your final presentation, we recommend adding interesting pieces related to a resort such as signage, bathroom kit, towels, keys, etc. This will make your project more interesting.
Congratulations on getting here! We wish you much success in your future projects!
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Teacher PlusCongratulations @betosabroso !
We love to see your work process. Excellent icon development and mockup presentation.
Here are some suggestions:
- Typographic selection lacks hierarchy. As they are fonts applied in such similar sizes and weights, they are perceived as monotonous. We recommend playing with the size and weight of the holders. In this way the reading of the texts will be much more impressive and pleasant.
- You have a wide selection of colors that in the end are not applied in any collateral piece. You will need to make the decision whether it is worth removing them from your color palette or applying them consistently to the application pieces. So that the brand does not lose coherence.
- For your final presentation, we recommend adding interesting pieces related to a resort such as signage, bathroom kit, towels, keys, etc. This will make your project more interesting.
Congratulations on getting here! We wish you much success in your future projects!
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