Course project
My project in Dynamic Vector Illustration: Keys to Color and Composition course
My project in Dynamic Vector Illustration: Keys to Color and Composition course
by Dagmar P. @dagmarelisabeth
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Dear Pietari Posti,
Thanks a lot for your course and lessons! Learned a lot from working with limited colour use and the 3 rule. Still struggling a bit with composition and after effects (gradients) as I only recently learned to work with illustrator.
Curious to hear your feedback. Thanks again!
Best, Dagmar
ps. Just after I drew the lady in the bathtub, I saw another bathtub in one of the other projects! Apparently, this is a popular element:)
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Thanks for sharing your final project. You have all the elements in there, subject is funny and the composition is OK. Maybe the right side feels a bit empty, I would have made the lady in the bath bigger, now all the elements feel a bit even sized, the plant is taking away from the person. Overall it misses some refinement, the shadows are too close to the elements, plant´s shadow should follow the floor and then the wall for example. It feels still like a colored sketch, maybe continue to work on the details still?
Good job for your first one anyways, that´s how you get started!
@studioposti Thanks a lot for your feedback! It indeed displays my challenges (especially composition and shadowing) and your feedback helps to look and work at it again. Thanks again. Happy new year!
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