Course project
Tallinn: Medieval Days
by Asep Bagja @bepitulaz
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The idea of this project is exploring the old town area of Tallinn. Luckily, there's a festival there, so a lot of interesting thing happened. The name of the festival is Keskaja Päevad (Medieval Days). I made the sequence to tell a story from people travelled to the location until people left the location.
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gustavominas
Teacher PlusHi @bepitulaz . Thank you for taking the course and submitting your project.
The festival looks very interesting, with a great setting and good characters.
The narrative is also well constructed, according to its proposal.
Perhaps there are some technical aspects that could be improved, especially in terms of framing.
At first, cutting the horse's head and feet doesn't work very well. It would be better to open the frame a little more, so that the children watching the scene could have more space.
In the second also that the girl deserved a little more space.
The fourth photo has an interesting relationship between the medieval lady and the contemporary tourist. I liked the time contrast, which is also repeated in the fifth scene, of the man with the ladies and the credit card machine.
The seventh photo is my favorite, with this detail of the hands on the green mass of the lady's dress. Detail well seen.
As an exercise for the next ones, I would tell you to try to get a little closer to the scenes, with a more open lens, to let the characters "breathe" more. It would also be interesting to explore a more dramatic type of light, and look for slightly more neutral backgrounds, which allow a better reading of the scene. Anyway, these are just ideas for the next session.
Good job!
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bepitulaz
Hi @gustavominas. Yes, I will try to do your suggestion for the next session. Thank you for the feedback, and also thanks for creating this course.
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