Haha! this looks awesome! :) a fun idea here! :)
You've done a good job showing the characters' expressions, here are a couple of notes that I think would improve this scene a little bit and make it more clear to the viewers:
-Soften (reduce) the shadows on the front characters hair (so it doesn't look too distracting)
-His hand (autostop sign) is a very important part of the illustration, but now it doesn't stand out clear enough, a little bit blending with the character behind. So try adding highlights to it, Or reduce the contrast of the character in the back (try adding a very soft screen layer in between them).
-If the paper sign isn't bending, there shouldn't be a shadow in the middle, I suggest making it consistent color without a lot of shading there :)
-Try adding a screen layer (or a blur effect) behind the background character. So that the environment has more depth and atmosphere.
Very nice work and feel free to submit an update anytime!
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samnassart
Teacher PlusHaha! this looks awesome! :) a fun idea here! :)
You've done a good job showing the characters' expressions, here are a couple of notes that I think would improve this scene a little bit and make it more clear to the viewers:
-Soften (reduce) the shadows on the front characters hair (so it doesn't look too distracting)
-His hand (autostop sign) is a very important part of the illustration, but now it doesn't stand out clear enough, a little bit blending with the character behind. So try adding highlights to it, Or reduce the contrast of the character in the back (try adding a very soft screen layer in between them).
-If the paper sign isn't bending, there shouldn't be a shadow in the middle, I suggest making it consistent color without a lot of shading there :)
-Try adding a screen layer (or a blur effect) behind the background character. So that the environment has more depth and atmosphere.
Very nice work and feel free to submit an update anytime!
idezel
@samnassart thanks for tips! I will try to follow your advices !
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