My project for course: Artistic Oil Portraiture on Paper

My project for course: Artistic Oil Portraiture on Paper

Camila, I'm grateful for the course.
I never worked with oil paints before, I found them soft and pleasant!
I'd be glad to get a feedback on this one. Should I add depth to it, like sharpening the leaves in some places? And what would you say about color palette - if it's balanced or too many colors are used? Thanks!