What a good job Leonardo! Thank you very much for being the first student to inaugurate the final projects of the course :)
I love the presentation page of your product, it communicates its idea and shape great, the colors and materials work perfectly in this type of products. The use of the line is very good, although a little more thickness in the contours would have given it more expressiveness. Do not be afraid to give more thickness, it is preferable before staying a bit short.
The shape of the stapler is perfectly understood by looking at the general view (that perspective works well for you) and the plant and profile. Take care of the depth of the perspective in the overview of the product, the base of the stapler has been somewhat exaggerated.
As for the photo and the composition, they are great. The black and white balance on your page is great, in addition to the choice of that neutral background for your photo.
Congratulations and I hope you enjoyed the course!
Thank you very much and a big hug: D
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franmolina
Teacher PlusWhat a good job Leonardo! Thank you very much for being the first student to inaugurate the final projects of the course :)
I love the presentation page of your product, it communicates its idea and shape great, the colors and materials work perfectly in this type of products. The use of the line is very good, although a little more thickness in the contours would have given it more expressiveness. Do not be afraid to give more thickness, it is preferable before staying a bit short.
The shape of the stapler is perfectly understood by looking at the general view (that perspective works well for you) and the plant and profile. Take care of the depth of the perspective in the overview of the product, the base of the stapler has been somewhat exaggerated.
As for the photo and the composition, they are great. The black and white balance on your page is great, in addition to the choice of that neutral background for your photo.
Congratulations and I hope you enjoyed the course!
Thank you very much and a big hug: D
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leocadio1011
PlusThank you very much Fran !!!
I really enjoyed the course, it is quite didactic and concrete, I really appreciate that you have shared the process you use to design a product.
Thank you also for your final recommendations, I will take them into consideration for future projects.
Congratulations on the course !!!
Cheers
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