Mi Proyecto del curso: Fotografía editorial de moda paso a paso

Mi Proyecto del curso: Fotografía editorial de moda paso a paso

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• viridianaf Teacher Plus

  29.05.2020 at 04:41

  

  Hi!!

  I find that as a test or portrait session it works well.

  You have very valuable points in favor and that I think you could exploit more if you decided to occupy that place again, my recommendation would be that you do:
  1.- the location looks super interesting, make the most of the space and not just the door. In the background we can appreciate more space that would surely be very good.
  2.- It seems to me that you have worked quite well the color of the photographs and the general finish (my hair just jumps a little, I feel that in some images the contrast with the background looks strange, it would be worth checking those parts)
  3.- The direction of the model is fine, although in some images I feel a little tense "very posed" and she in her most natural attitude works much better.
  In other photos, care must be taken in the selection since in some, the direction of the gaze shows most of the eye in white.

  I think the work is good, I invite you to check the details that I mention.

  Cheers!!

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