The project is looking very good, thanks for sharing it! :)
For the next time you upload more images, I think it would be nice if you don't delete the ones that are already there, maybe you can edit this same project or create a new one so we don't lose the process that is very nice and interesting to be able to see it.
As I told you before, the work with textures is very good, they coexist very well. And the papers are precious.
The photo is also very well done, the perfect focus, all the details are visible, the texture of the paper. Perhaps you have to see what happens to the shadows when the papers are further apart (in the cloud or above the lighthouse for example) that are projected very hard (they look black). If it's a decision or if it just stayed that way.
I really like the incorporation of the characters.
I think that you should lower the boat a bit, so the bird does not overlap with the yellow above and its shape is better cut out on the blue.
Another thing to keep in mind is the margins and excess. Are these entire illustrations or are they a part of a larger illustration? If it is a whole illustration, it would be good to see if the elements can be better arranged, for example that the lighthouse enters and the margin of the illustration has a space similar to that of the ship with the other margin, or see the trees that are cut , how you can solve it better.
Is the second illustration a detail of the first or is it the next illustration in the series?
I love those little sailing birds.
Hello!
Thanks for the suggestions. I tell you that the cloud over the lighthouse was a mistake.
The birds are a whole illustration. I am going to consider what you told me regarding the elements that should appear so that it shows that the birds are part of the above illustration.
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If the second is a whole illustration, be careful with the margins, give more air and background space for all sides to the boat with the birds. A possible trick if you already have it done is to build a slightly larger background and use that same boat that you already cut out.
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estrellita_caracol
Teacher PlusHello Ana!
The project is looking very good, thanks for sharing it! :)
For the next time you upload more images, I think it would be nice if you don't delete the ones that are already there, maybe you can edit this same project or create a new one so we don't lose the process that is very nice and interesting to be able to see it.
As I told you before, the work with textures is very good, they coexist very well. And the papers are precious.
The photo is also very well done, the perfect focus, all the details are visible, the texture of the paper. Perhaps you have to see what happens to the shadows when the papers are further apart (in the cloud or above the lighthouse for example) that are projected very hard (they look black). If it's a decision or if it just stayed that way.
I really like the incorporation of the characters.
I think that you should lower the boat a bit, so the bird does not overlap with the yellow above and its shape is better cut out on the blue.
Another thing to keep in mind is the margins and excess. Are these entire illustrations or are they a part of a larger illustration? If it is a whole illustration, it would be good to see if the elements can be better arranged, for example that the lighthouse enters and the margin of the illustration has a space similar to that of the ship with the other margin, or see the trees that are cut , how you can solve it better.
Is the second illustration a detail of the first or is it the next illustration in the series?
I love those little sailing birds.
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anab313
Hello!
Thanks for the suggestions. I tell you that the cloud over the lighthouse was a mistake.
The birds are a whole illustration. I am going to consider what you told me regarding the elements that should appear so that it shows that the birds are part of the above illustration.
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estrellita_caracol
Teacher Plus@anab313
If the second is a whole illustration, be careful with the margins, give more air and background space for all sides to the boat with the birds. A possible trick if you already have it done is to build a slightly larger background and use that same boat that you already cut out.
Big kiss!
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anne_darling
PlusLove this, it made me feel happy as soon as I looked at it! Love the textures. Your artwork is so inspiring. Thank you for sharing.
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