Nice work for your final project, the letter form is pretty good overall and the composition works.
The part that I see most problematic is that of the lower line of the letter "L" in Life, it is much thicker than the rest of the letters and being just below it gives the feeling of an excess of weight in it is part of the design and it centers attention in that area, maybe you could try to reduce a little the width of that stroke in the vector file.
The shadows give a lot of play and volume to the design, although some are in areas that do not fit me much, normally the shadows are generated from a point of light and are usually in a specific direction.
As I told you, in general the project is very good, I hope you have enjoyed the process and the course and these few tips that I leave you here have been helpful.
Thank you very much for your observations, you are right with the thicknesses, I will take them into account for my next projects, as well as the observation of the shadows, it is something that I am starting to do and I am just experimenting on that, these are the comments that should be received every day by people to improve day by day, not only receive likes or congratulations, without detracting from that obvious.
Thank you very much for your course and your help, you are a great calligrapher and lyricist! Greetings.
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misterkams
Teacher PlusHello Andres,
Nice work for your final project, the letter form is pretty good overall and the composition works.
The part that I see most problematic is that of the lower line of the letter "L" in Life, it is much thicker than the rest of the letters and being just below it gives the feeling of an excess of weight in it is part of the design and it centers attention in that area, maybe you could try to reduce a little the width of that stroke in the vector file.
The shadows give a lot of play and volume to the design, although some are in areas that do not fit me much, normally the shadows are generated from a point of light and are usually in a specific direction.
As I told you, in general the project is very good, I hope you have enjoyed the process and the course and these few tips that I leave you here have been helpful.
Greetings.
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andreshena0
Hello Mr. Kams,
Thank you very much for your observations, you are right with the thicknesses, I will take them into account for my next projects, as well as the observation of the shadows, it is something that I am starting to do and I am just experimenting on that, these are the comments that should be received every day by people to improve day by day, not only receive likes or congratulations, without detracting from that obvious.
Thank you very much for your course and your help, you are a great calligrapher and lyricist! Greetings.
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