Hello Miguel Angel,
Your proposal is going in the right direction and you touch on fun topics. As main feedback, we suggest you summarize and formulate the copies in a more direct way so that the audience doesn't get confused or tired. Keep in mind that people spend very little energy reading ads.
Try to reduce connectors and stick to only those that contribute to the main insight and generate humor or surprise in the reader. Many of them are already fine, review those that have too many parts (for example the last one).
Thank you for taking the course and for contributing to our enrichment. Greetings!
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putosmodernos
Teacher PlusHello Miguel Angel,
Your proposal is going in the right direction and you touch on fun topics. As main feedback, we suggest you summarize and formulate the copies in a more direct way so that the audience doesn't get confused or tired. Keep in mind that people spend very little energy reading ads.
Try to reduce connectors and stick to only those that contribute to the main insight and generate humor or surprise in the reader. Many of them are already fine, review those that have too many parts (for example the last one).
Thank you for taking the course and for contributing to our enrichment. Greetings!
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