Hello Ahmed,
Congratulations on completing the course and thanks for sharing your final project with the community.
This photograph beautifully captures a serene scene, the rule of thirds is well applied, with the person positioned to the right, drawing the viewer's eye into the scene. The soft, diffused lighting creates a calm and moody atmosphere, enhancing the natural feel of the setting. The depth of field is well-managed, with the background sufficiently blurred to keep the focus on the person and the immediate surroundings. The greens and earthy tones are rich and vibrant, adding to the overall appeal of the photograph. The exposure is balanced, retaining details in both the shadows and highlights, crucial for a scene with varying light intensities.
To improve this photograph, ensure that the main subject (the person) is in sharp focus, as it appears slightly soft, which can detract from the impact. Consider experimenting with different angles or perspectives; a lower angle might make the scene appear more immersive and dramatic. The right side of the image feels slightly cluttered, so cropping slightly to eliminate distractions or adjusting the framing to include more of the archways could create a more balanced composition. Slightly enhancing the contrast and sharpness in post-processing can add more definition to the details, making the image pop. Emphasizing the lines of the archways leading towards the person could guide the viewer's eye more effectively through the scene. Overall, this is a well-executed photograph with a strong sense of mood and atmosphere. With minor adjustments, it can be elevated to an even higher standard.
Thanks again for sharing your project.
Best of luck,
Giulia
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giulia.candussi
Teacher PlusHello Ahmed,
Congratulations on completing the course and thanks for sharing your final project with the community.
This photograph beautifully captures a serene scene, the rule of thirds is well applied, with the person positioned to the right, drawing the viewer's eye into the scene. The soft, diffused lighting creates a calm and moody atmosphere, enhancing the natural feel of the setting. The depth of field is well-managed, with the background sufficiently blurred to keep the focus on the person and the immediate surroundings. The greens and earthy tones are rich and vibrant, adding to the overall appeal of the photograph. The exposure is balanced, retaining details in both the shadows and highlights, crucial for a scene with varying light intensities.
To improve this photograph, ensure that the main subject (the person) is in sharp focus, as it appears slightly soft, which can detract from the impact. Consider experimenting with different angles or perspectives; a lower angle might make the scene appear more immersive and dramatic. The right side of the image feels slightly cluttered, so cropping slightly to eliminate distractions or adjusting the framing to include more of the archways could create a more balanced composition. Slightly enhancing the contrast and sharpness in post-processing can add more definition to the details, making the image pop. Emphasizing the lines of the archways leading towards the person could guide the viewer's eye more effectively through the scene. Overall, this is a well-executed photograph with a strong sense of mood and atmosphere. With minor adjustments, it can be elevated to an even higher standard.
Thanks again for sharing your project.
Best of luck,
Giulia
17kamaraahmed
Plus@giulia_candussi Thank you for the feedback :)
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