Hello, @assunbadia ! Thank you for taking the course and sending me your project.
The subway idea for a project seems excellent to me. The theme is accessible and part of everyday life, and never fails to offer possibilities. The subject also has a long tradition in street photography, from Walker Evans (https://www.metmuseum.org/perspectives/videos/2013/12/walker-evans-subway-series-art-explained) to Subway, from Bruce Davidson (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gY6o2C0O9V4) to Underground, by Marco Pesaresi (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M9yKkELYewo).
The strongest characteristic of your work is the sense of urgency, rush and rush that you convey in your images, mainly through the use of low speeds, but also through the flow of passengers. This is very interesting.
Personally, I would like to see a slightly more dramatic treatment of the images, which would speak better to the energy of the photos.
The key and strongest photos for me are 5, 6, 7, 10, 11 and 13 - special emphasis on 5 and 6, with this game between train movement and static passengers. Regarding the editing, I liked how you sequenced it too.
Congratulations on the work, it is worth developing further.
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bettinasuarez21
Photo 4 seems beautiful to me.
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Teacher PlusHello, @assunbadia ! Thank you for taking the course and sending me your project.
The subway idea for a project seems excellent to me. The theme is accessible and part of everyday life, and never fails to offer possibilities. The subject also has a long tradition in street photography, from Walker Evans (https://www.metmuseum.org/perspectives/videos/2013/12/walker-evans-subway-series-art-explained) to Subway, from Bruce Davidson (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gY6o2C0O9V4) to Underground, by Marco Pesaresi (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M9yKkELYewo).
The strongest characteristic of your work is the sense of urgency, rush and rush that you convey in your images, mainly through the use of low speeds, but also through the flow of passengers. This is very interesting.
Personally, I would like to see a slightly more dramatic treatment of the images, which would speak better to the energy of the photos.
The key and strongest photos for me are 5, 6, 7, 10, 11 and 13 - special emphasis on 5 and 6, with this game between train movement and static passengers. Regarding the editing, I liked how you sequenced it too.
Congratulations on the work, it is worth developing further.
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