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Mi proyecto del curso: Técnicas de storytelling para transmitir tu mensaje
by Ivon Santino @hospes_victus3
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Accesorios en chapa de oro. Calidad nacional. Hechos con el cuidado que merece cada pieza para adornar a cada mujer que es unica. Con estos accesorios en chapa de oro sabras que no necesitas demasiados solo los adecuados.
Porque los accesorios son uno de los mejores amigos de las mujeres.
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gabrielgarciadeoro
Teacher PlusHi Ivan,
How are you? I hope that very good!
First of all sorry for the delay in response. They were months with a great accumulation of work, and I am clear that to assess your projects I prefer to wait until I have enough time to look at them with affection.
I understand that in this case, your proposal is not yet developed according to the template of the final project of the course, but I have seen that it was something that you had already worked on in other courses on the platform, so if it seems like it, I will comment on it:
For me the proposal is fine, but when you talk about GOLD SHEET in the headline, the word "sheet" takes away a bit of value from the product, as if it were of poor quality. I don't know if you could find any other word like Lamina or something similar...
Apart from this, I wanted to personally thank you for the trust you have placed in the course. I hope you have found useful tools, and that very soon the storytelling will make it possible for us to see each other again in new adventures!
A hug!
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