Francoli, are you okay? Thank you so much for publishing your final work. I really liked the way you opened the program, with the three of you talking, giving information and introducing the subject of "procrastination", by the way, very well chosen, since "procrastination" is a serious issue for many people... a matter of general interest. I like the exchange between you, the text, the realization. I just suggest that you put a little more agility in the exchanges and power in the lines. Let the chat seem even more like a conversation between friends at the bar! I think that your product has everything to fly high!! And I LOVE the title: "By the light of the lamp" is perfect!! A big hug to you, I hope you enjoyed the course a lot and, if you have any questions, I'll always be here!! ; )
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isabellasaes
Teacher PlusFrancoli, are you okay? Thank you so much for publishing your final work. I really liked the way you opened the program, with the three of you talking, giving information and introducing the subject of "procrastination", by the way, very well chosen, since "procrastination" is a serious issue for many people... a matter of general interest. I like the exchange between you, the text, the realization. I just suggest that you put a little more agility in the exchanges and power in the lines. Let the chat seem even more like a conversation between friends at the bar! I think that your product has everything to fly high!! And I LOVE the title: "By the light of the lamp" is perfect!! A big hug to you, I hope you enjoyed the course a lot and, if you have any questions, I'll always be here!! ; )
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franciolliaraujo
Thank you so much @isabellasaes
Valuable tips that we will use from our next issue, for sure.
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