First of all, congratulations for having made your film! That should already make you feel proud, it's not easy to get projects off the ground.
I recommend that for the future you follow the steps that I propose in the course, have at least one written script and treatment to be able to communicate with your team or be able to explain or sell your film, something that you have not done in your project. Without these previous exercises it is very difficult for me to give you more detailed feedback.
I find the chronicle you do of the pandemic and the COVID vaccination process interesting. On the other hand, I think that it lacks some ingredients to make it a true story: dramatic arc, an antagonist, etc. I also find it difficult to understand what is the relationship between the film and the images that you include.
In any case, as I say, congratulations, it's not easy to get the movies off the ground. Go for the next one!
:)
c
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cesarpesquera
Teacher PlusHi Carlos
First of all, congratulations for having made your film! That should already make you feel proud, it's not easy to get projects off the ground.
I recommend that for the future you follow the steps that I propose in the course, have at least one written script and treatment to be able to communicate with your team or be able to explain or sell your film, something that you have not done in your project. Without these previous exercises it is very difficult for me to give you more detailed feedback.
I find the chronicle you do of the pandemic and the COVID vaccination process interesting. On the other hand, I think that it lacks some ingredients to make it a true story: dramatic arc, an antagonist, etc. I also find it difficult to understand what is the relationship between the film and the images that you include.
In any case, as I say, congratulations, it's not easy to get the movies off the ground. Go for the next one!
:)
c
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