Wow ! I l love how vibrant and interesting you've gone with the purple tone - very illustrative and really fun. Love that you've moved the man more central to make him more the subject of the story.
My feedback would be: be careful how dark you are going in places on the main body of the building ...because the building goes quite dark it's harder to make out the bin and the horse head statue/ornament. I think if the building was a little less contrasty these other elements would pop more - they are assisting elements so don't need to stand out, but to be a tiny bit more readable would be great I think.
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izzyburtonart
Teacher PlusWow ! I l love how vibrant and interesting you've gone with the purple tone - very illustrative and really fun. Love that you've moved the man more central to make him more the subject of the story.
My feedback would be: be careful how dark you are going in places on the main body of the building ...because the building goes quite dark it's harder to make out the bin and the horse head statue/ornament. I think if the building was a little less contrasty these other elements would pop more - they are assisting elements so don't need to stand out, but to be a tiny bit more readable would be great I think.
Fantastic job :D
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