Of course, thank you for asking.
In general, your artwork seems a little bit flat i think, you need to add some depth.
The smoke can be interesting, but in my opinion it shouldn't be on all the visual.
You could make the bird smaller,
to highlight better you mean element,
the hot air balloon made of butterflies. It will make him look much bigger.
You could change the landscape, so the balloon seems higher in the sky.
With some shadows on the butterflies you could create some volume, so it doesn't look flat, more like a balloon.
What you think?
I can't wait to see the changes you will make!
HI!
Sorry for my late answer!
i was in holidays.
You really did a wonderful work!
I would just make the hot air balloon bigger
as it is your main subject.
Thank you so much for sharing.
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skipandwork
Teacher PlusLove the vibe,
the balloon made of butterflies is an awesome idea.
Thank you so much for sharing your work.
kamalsahansi
@skipandwork Thank you Can you please comment on how to improve upon I am not satisfied yet.
skipandwork
Teacher PlusOf course, thank you for asking.
In general, your artwork seems a little bit flat i think, you need to add some depth.
The smoke can be interesting, but in my opinion it shouldn't be on all the visual.
You could make the bird smaller,
to highlight better you mean element,
the hot air balloon made of butterflies. It will make him look much bigger.
You could change the landscape, so the balloon seems higher in the sky.
With some shadows on the butterflies you could create some volume, so it doesn't look flat, more like a balloon.
What you think?
I can't wait to see the changes you will make!
kamalsahansi
@skipandwork Thank you so much i will try to make changes, Thanks
kamalsahansi
Hi, i tried to redo as per suggestions
kamalsahansi
Hi Waiting for your comments
skipandwork
Teacher PlusHI!
Sorry for my late answer!
i was in holidays.
You really did a wonderful work!
I would just make the hot air balloon bigger
as it is your main subject.
Thank you so much for sharing.
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