Hello Israel, I apologize for my late evaluation. I saw your video two weeks ago, but at the time I didn't have the time to sit down and comment on it calmly.
He told you that I liked it, but above all that I could like it very much if you had worked some more parts, I explain:
I think you make an intro of the video that without being anything exceptional, has that point of truth and quality that makes you expect a very well produced video, which I am not saying is not, but which curiously does not end as high as you would expect, well I really like that documentary point with real sound from the beginning, a lot. and I kept asking myself why not finish it the same, but I respect your decision, obviously. Although I think that an ending that meets the initial style would have rounded off an idea that is not very original, (the ring and rap have been explored in clips of different fur for many years, but you still get me to see one more example of urban music being a symbol of struggle and fight, but also of overcoming and rage.
I think the interpretations are correct and well matched with the voice, something that not all your colleagues can say, in that sense I also think that you have good control of the rhythm and montage, even if you sin in some moments of transition effects that do not convince me , I think that in general you control the tempo very well.
Another thing that does not convince me is the use of the drone, although perhaps if you are looking for a video game aesthetic, it is valid. Probably the use of black and white saves you there, which I would have liked more if it had been more extreme, crude, more contrasted, but in general I think it is a valid bet, and you have known how to use the few resources of light and effects to create a haunting atmosphere that works really well with the song.
Like many other projects, I would have asked you to invest a little more in some optics to obtain a more pro final aesthetic, but hey, you have shown talent to take advantage of what you had.
For all this, and above all for trying to tell a story, you have all my respect and if I had to evaluate you I would give you a good mark!
Congratulations and happy new year !!!
Hello Juan, sorry for responding until now, I lost count and I barely managed to recover it to continue with my learning. I appreciate the points and observations that I indicate and I will try to improve them. In this video there was no budget and there were many collaborations. congratulations that you liked the video. thank you so much
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juanmacarrillo
Teacher PlusHello Israel, I apologize for my late evaluation. I saw your video two weeks ago, but at the time I didn't have the time to sit down and comment on it calmly.
He told you that I liked it, but above all that I could like it very much if you had worked some more parts, I explain:
I think you make an intro of the video that without being anything exceptional, has that point of truth and quality that makes you expect a very well produced video, which I am not saying is not, but which curiously does not end as high as you would expect, well I really like that documentary point with real sound from the beginning, a lot. and I kept asking myself why not finish it the same, but I respect your decision, obviously. Although I think that an ending that meets the initial style would have rounded off an idea that is not very original, (the ring and rap have been explored in clips of different fur for many years, but you still get me to see one more example of urban music being a symbol of struggle and fight, but also of overcoming and rage.
I think the interpretations are correct and well matched with the voice, something that not all your colleagues can say, in that sense I also think that you have good control of the rhythm and montage, even if you sin in some moments of transition effects that do not convince me , I think that in general you control the tempo very well.
Another thing that does not convince me is the use of the drone, although perhaps if you are looking for a video game aesthetic, it is valid. Probably the use of black and white saves you there, which I would have liked more if it had been more extreme, crude, more contrasted, but in general I think it is a valid bet, and you have known how to use the few resources of light and effects to create a haunting atmosphere that works really well with the song.
Like many other projects, I would have asked you to invest a little more in some optics to obtain a more pro final aesthetic, but hey, you have shown talent to take advantage of what you had.
For all this, and above all for trying to tell a story, you have all my respect and if I had to evaluate you I would give you a good mark!
Congratulations and happy new year !!!
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Hello Juan, sorry for responding until now, I lost count and I barely managed to recover it to continue with my learning. I appreciate the points and observations that I indicate and I will try to improve them. In this video there was no budget and there were many collaborations. congratulations that you liked the video. thank you so much
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