Mi proyecto del curso: Planificación de tu carrera creativa

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• biancanazari

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  04.03.2024 at 20:49

  

  Hello everything is fine?

  The project is really cool! I understand that it is a mobile comic, which will be shared over time. This would be the portfolio project of the creative process, right?
  In my opinion, you include a very complete content of your creation process, but I miss two things.
  The first would be to take references from presentations of similar projects to create a more cohesive and "clean" final result. The way you presented the boards, the colors change a lot from board to board, the figures are spread out very freely, which creates a feeling of disorganization. But I liked the written information, the notes.
  The second thing I miss is the end result! I'd love to see a "page" from your comic as a highlight, not only at the beginning of the project, but at the end. A mockup of what it would look like on a cell phone. I feel like this project needs to be "tied up", because here I only see the loose elements but not assembled into a single project.

  Here are some examples:
  https://www.behance.net/gallery/191523215/ZMANEBA-Character-guide?tracking_source=search_projects|webcomic&l=36
  https://www.behance.net/gallery/174480903/VIAGEM-AO-MEQUIVERSO-Webcomic-for-McDonalds?tracking_source=search_projects|webcomic&l=38
  https://joyang.ca/category/comics/
  https://www.behance.net/gallery/162860871/Dying-Light-Webcomic-Project?tracking_source=search_projects|webcomic&l=52

  Thanks for the upload and good luck with the project :)

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