Mi proyecto del curso: Concept art para diseño de personajes y worldbuilding

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• evenmehlamundsen

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  01.12.2022 at 13:14

  

  YEP!! YEPPYEPPYEPP

  This is great. I have no crits. Alright, I always have some crits, but they are small things, near useless. This is great.

  1: Keep more of your lineart. You draw with these great big expressive lines. Keep them, think about what they represent within your style, and integrate into your final piece. Or don't, I'm not your mom, but it is a really gorgeous feature of your work and it would be a shame to lose them.

  2: Spend more time modelling. Really loving the level of Large-To-Small design, but I REALLY want you to go the other way, working from an understanding of the complex things, and then simplifying as you need, rather than as part of a pre-established aesthetic. Your lines are great, make sure you treat all the drawing with that love,

  3.Write me a story. I love the level of your designs, but I want a story with it. Tell me now just about how cool something can be, but who they are, and make it interesting.

  In the end I just wanna quote Arthur Howitzer Jr.

  Try to make it look like you made it that way on purpose.

  Even

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