Hi Javier,
Despite having posted few photos, I can get an idea of the condo. I saw that it has a bold architecture at the entrance and is very plastic. I really liked the photographs, you just need to place the lines more parallel and the horizon line more defined so it doesn't get too crooked. I could have explored a little more the shadows on the floor and inside, getting more pictures only of this entrance area, because it is very plastic and very good. I could have gone into the tunnel, taken pictures of the shadows and the windows and the whole area of the pergola and the orange structure.
I liked the photo of the pool, the place is very nice and well chosen. Whenever you have the horizon, pay close attention so that it is always straight. The photo of the interior is good, it just needed a little more adjustment in the curtains and a slightly better cut. I liked the natural light with the artificial. Explore the environments a little more! Big hug. Keep shooting, good photos!
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tucareines
Teacher PlusHello Javier.
Good pictures! Soon I will analyze if your project.
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finniciusrevem
Congrats! Looks great!
tucareines
Teacher PlusHi Javier,
Despite having posted few photos, I can get an idea of the condo. I saw that it has a bold architecture at the entrance and is very plastic. I really liked the photographs, you just need to place the lines more parallel and the horizon line more defined so it doesn't get too crooked. I could have explored a little more the shadows on the floor and inside, getting more pictures only of this entrance area, because it is very plastic and very good. I could have gone into the tunnel, taken pictures of the shadows and the windows and the whole area of the pergola and the orange structure.
I liked the photo of the pool, the place is very nice and well chosen. Whenever you have the horizon, pay close attention so that it is always straight. The photo of the interior is good, it just needed a little more adjustment in the curtains and a slightly better cut. I liked the natural light with the artificial. Explore the environments a little more! Big hug. Keep shooting, good photos!
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javierhawksvip
@finniciusrevem thanks :)
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javierhawksvip
@tucareines thanks for your observations teacher :)
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