Very interesting ideas on re-creating this project! I find it quite fascinating how you made everything darker, it definitely gives a much different and more somber mood to the image. I think you did a very good job with the composition and layout and all the elements look seamlessly pieced together, aside from a few of the edges around the birds. I think the main thing to think about is the over saturation in the sky section. I would definitely bring down the saturation a bit and make the overall sky tone more blue, and make the statue and birds more of a warmer yellow tone. It also might be really interesting to make this image black and white, I think it would look very dramatic with the darker imagery that you used in the piece. Overall, great work! I hope you keep going and exploring more of what you can create using digital collage.
I only just noticed the back of the pigeon on the arm. Guess that falls back to the beginning of the lesson where you said to walk away and come back with fresh eyes. Complete miss on my part there.
But thanks for taking the time to give feedback on the final project, you are the first teacher who has from all the other courses I have done here on Domestika (I have completed 9). I also very much enjoyed your style of teaching and learning to that of the other courses I have done here on Domestika. Thanks very much for creating a good subject matter to try and recreate.
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nick_pedersen
Teacher PlusVery interesting ideas on re-creating this project! I find it quite fascinating how you made everything darker, it definitely gives a much different and more somber mood to the image. I think you did a very good job with the composition and layout and all the elements look seamlessly pieced together, aside from a few of the edges around the birds. I think the main thing to think about is the over saturation in the sky section. I would definitely bring down the saturation a bit and make the overall sky tone more blue, and make the statue and birds more of a warmer yellow tone. It also might be really interesting to make this image black and white, I think it would look very dramatic with the darker imagery that you used in the piece. Overall, great work! I hope you keep going and exploring more of what you can create using digital collage.
griceadam89
@nick_pedersen thanks for the feedback.
I only just noticed the back of the pigeon on the arm. Guess that falls back to the beginning of the lesson where you said to walk away and come back with fresh eyes. Complete miss on my part there.
But thanks for taking the time to give feedback on the final project, you are the first teacher who has from all the other courses I have done here on Domestika (I have completed 9). I also very much enjoyed your style of teaching and learning to that of the other courses I have done here on Domestika. Thanks very much for creating a good subject matter to try and recreate.
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