Hello Antia, thank you for sharing your personal project.
If I'm not mistaken I understand that it wants to be a kind of "artistic video clip" to promote these musicians. Truth? In general, it is difficult to judge a work that has been recorded and edited by the same person, so I try to focus only on the montage to give you a couple of tips. The atmosphere you create is good and elegant, I still play this very passionate music and when we go back to the dancers in the park we are always too far away from them. There are also no shots of the dance in close-up of the 2? If there was, being able to see more of their eyes, and their faces while they dance would help the viewer a lot to perceive that emotion that the music carries. Regarding the cuts, I see that you have chosen a slow rhythm, not closely linked to the rhythm of the music, and I find it interesting, there are still some errors in the cuts. For example, if we are watching a musician and the camera starts panning, you cannot cut, because you leave the camera movement halfway and it looks like a jump. try or cut before the camera moves, or after it has made the move. In this way, the cut will come out cleaner and more elegant. Finally I invite you to a little exercise, why don't you edit a trailer for this same piece? You choose a piece of music (2 minutes) and on that mount the images of both the musicians and the dancers without worrying about the musical or choreographic continuity, but choosing the best moments. It would be very curious to see what comes out;)
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Hello Antia, thank you for sharing your personal project.
If I'm not mistaken I understand that it wants to be a kind of "artistic video clip" to promote these musicians. Truth? In general, it is difficult to judge a work that has been recorded and edited by the same person, so I try to focus only on the montage to give you a couple of tips. The atmosphere you create is good and elegant, I still play this very passionate music and when we go back to the dancers in the park we are always too far away from them. There are also no shots of the dance in close-up of the 2? If there was, being able to see more of their eyes, and their faces while they dance would help the viewer a lot to perceive that emotion that the music carries. Regarding the cuts, I see that you have chosen a slow rhythm, not closely linked to the rhythm of the music, and I find it interesting, there are still some errors in the cuts. For example, if we are watching a musician and the camera starts panning, you cannot cut, because you leave the camera movement halfway and it looks like a jump. try or cut before the camera moves, or after it has made the move. In this way, the cut will come out cleaner and more elegant. Finally I invite you to a little exercise, why don't you edit a trailer for this same piece? You choose a piece of music (2 minutes) and on that mount the images of both the musicians and the dancers without worrying about the musical or choreographic continuity, but choosing the best moments. It would be very curious to see what comes out;)
Thank you very much for your advice. I'll keep working on it, see what comes out.
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