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My project in Artistic Illustration Techniques with Graphite Pencils course
My project in Artistic Illustration Techniques with Graphite Pencils course
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A start with what I have...I'd like a smoother paper and other H pencils but I really enjoyed drawing him. Look forward to critique. Annie
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Hello¡¡
Thank you for participating in my class.
It is a good way to start. The drawing is accurate, the proportions of the horse are fine. It is interesting that the drawing is inside a circle. However, the horse looks a little trapped. The circle a little wider will solve this issue.
Regarding the pencil, it is a good beginning. Maybe work a little more on gradation in order the make it smother. Some lines on the stomach of the horse look a little rough.
On the other hand, the legs that are further away from us get confused by the legs that we see closer, especially the front legs. This is because you are using the same tone. Maybe a darker tone on the legs that we have further away will help to give some deep.
Overall is looking good. My only recommendation will be smothered the pencil a little and keep an eye on the definition of the dept. This part is a little more complicated but with practice, you will get it.
Thank you so much. A great detailed crit with lots I can further my work with...
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