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Mi Proyecto del curso: la media naranja y Ramiro medio mugroso
Mi Proyecto del curso: la media naranja y Ramiro medio mugroso
ile María Florencia Evdemon @fevdemon
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Hola Natalia: Estuve trabajando en este proyecto. La idea era hacer un libro con dos historias, maquetado con una encuadernación en biombo, o zigzag, no se como se llame jaja. Pero la idea es que se pueda abrir de un lado y del otro.
Tengo muchísimas dudas con él, desde el mismísimo título elegido hasta la historia. Incluso las ilustraciones (quise hacer unas ilustraciones con reminiscencias del arte textil andino, pero por esa manera de dibujar cuadrada que tiene el diseño textil, que también lo tienen las medias con ilustraciones) me generan dudas porque no se si queda monótonono, dado que todas las ilustraciones son todos planos generales. Bienvenida son todas las opiniones.
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Visually it is very beautiful. I would increase the font size and the space between the lines from you
@contadoradehistorias1 Thanks for the suggestion. I took it!
Hi! It's great in general terms, what you say about the accordion is perfectly understood, which has a history of each side, right? What is not very clear to me is where the other begins. I suspect it is in the first double yellow. Between that double (which ends with Ramiro's mother making puppets, which is a very sweet idea) and the next I see a leap in history, that first double is half off the hook. Maybe you can drop that idea of making the puppets towards the end of it all. See how it turns out.
I love the illustrations, they don't seem monotonous at all and I really like the palette.
Congratulations on the project!
@natumendez Hello Natalia, yes, the second story starts in the second yellow double page, where Ramiro sees the socks pierced. What I'm going to do is put a capital letter so that it is understood when each story starts. I was doing word repetition modifications and so on when I had a fair time in the last of the exercises. Thanks for your return! Cheers!
@contadoradehistorias1 I agree, you can hardly see the letters
@fevdemon very nice drawings, congratulations !!
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