Mi Proyecto del curso: Diseño e ilustración de personajes increíbles

Mi Proyecto del curso: Diseño e ilustración de personajes increíbles

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• crisaseo Öğretmen Artı

  08.05.2020 , 04:40

  

  Hi Yadira !!! What an excellent expression you achieved with your character! he is very nice !!!!

  I hope you had a good time creating it, I think so because you obtained very good results, I share some comments that may work for future characters.

  As far as possible and if your style allows it, try to play with irregular strokes, not all your character elements have to have perfect strokes, when you start having more irregular elements you give it more life, depth and you end up doing it more realistic, for example hair, or clothes are elements that in your character would work at this point.

  You already have a comic situation, but try to have other details such as the bag being broken for example. Regarding this situation of the bag and the cigar; To make it more evident that the cigarette is falling, lowering your hand from La Bolsa as much as possible helps you so that La Bolsa and the cigarette do not fight in communication and thus are not distracted from each other. If you want to focus your attention on the cigarette, try to leave that area free so that nothing competes with it.

  I think that if you move your eyes from place to place more towards what would come from being the one who is pointing the lamp, you will achieve a better result, right now it seems to me that they are not looking towards who illuminated it with the flashlight.

  Cheers !!!!

  Chris !!!

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• kolibri_illustration

  08.05.2020 , 06:04

  

  Thanks @crisaseo now I see it, I am going to take these things into account more because my conflict with my characters is that I always end up making them very stiff and that is why you mention, ... by the way I had in mind that the bag had a patch. And yes :) I had a lot of fun making Lizardo, I chose the lizard, because they come into my house a lot and make noise at dawn and it amuses me that I put a flashlight on them or turn on the light and they stay still, as if that would not see them.

  The course was very good, I'll be sure to repeat several videos.

  Cheers :)
  Yadira.

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• crisaseo Öğretmen Artı

  08.05.2020 , 06:14

  

  If you have any questions, we are here !!!!

  @kolibri_illustration

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