My project in Modern Portraiture with Procreate: Stylize Your Subject course

My project in Modern Portraiture with Procreate: Stylize Your Subject course

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• paulryding Öğretmen Artı

  28.01.2022 , 14:02

  

  Thank you for signing up to my course and for sharing your final artwork.

  I would like to give you some feedback that i hope you will find helpful. I see you used your own photo as reference? I would suggest creating more contrast in the photo: increasing the gamma, white & black areas just to give you more information to work from.

  your use of pencil is very delicate and i really love how you have given your hair such an organic and soft look. I would perhaps readdress how the light hits your cheekbones and ears? Just even using the eraser tool to quickly highlight some strong areas of light. It's a similar technique used in drawing eyes, in that just that use of quick light reflection can give the image just vibrancy and life.

  thanks

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• frank_z

  28.01.2022 , 15:53

  

  @Paul Ryding Thank you for the great feedback! It was the first time doing a portrait with ipad and procreate. I think I zoomed in too much, which took a long time to finish with the fine strokes. I will apply those highlights and see how it looks. Thanks again for the great class.

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