Keys to an effective presentation - Get live feedback from an expert

Presentations are a powerful method for sharing your product, brand, or idea. But if they’re not designed well, they can confuse and even bore your audience.
In her upcoming Domestika Live (November 6, 5pm UK / 6pm MAD / 11am CDMX), presentation and data designer Katya Kovalenko (@katyakovalenko) will give feedback on audience-submitted presentations and help to improve them using Keynote, sharing her tips for designing powerful and effective presentations.
If you would like to have Katya review your presentation and offer advice, in the comments of this post leave an open (not private) Dropbox or Google Drive link to your editable PowerPoint or Keynote (if you use a special font in your presentation, please attach it in the same link). And if you have any questions about presentation design, leave them in the comments for her to answer during the Live!
If you want to learn more about how to design beautiful and effective presentations from scratch, check out Katya Kovalenko’s online course, Principles of Presentation Design and keep an eye out for her upcoming online course about advanced presentation design!
nguyenquan33399
Nha chu là gì?
Bệnh thực chất là tổ chức răng miệng quanh răng, có tác dụng chống đỡ và giữ răng trong xương hàm.
Do đó, bệnh chính là việc các mô xung quanh răng đang bị tổn thương nghiêm trọng, gây ảnh hưởng đến khả năng chống đỡ răng cũng như các tổ chức khác quanh răng. Bệnh nha chu nếu không được phát hiện và điều trị kịp thời sẽ dẫn đến nguy cơ mất răng vô cùng cao, đồng thời gây mất thẩm mỹ cho người bệnh.
https://nhakhoanucuoisang.wixsite.com/mysite/home/kien-thuc-nha-khoa/nha-chu-la-gi-va-cach-tri-ra-sao
jmmadruga
Hello!
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1ZijYpWOjhEI9jW4V3-30xtObMnG3xdAbzdrALHDL8zo/edit?usp=sharing
It's in portuguese and it uses a lot of memes (It's a good tool to reach out to young people here in Brazil). But if you can give any tip on how to improve it, I would be glad.
Thanks in advance!