Thank you very much @elena_infante for sharing your work.
Where is this short film filmed? The location seems really beautiful to me. I think you have done a beautiful job, for poetic moments, especially in the part of the sunflower fields.
I liked how you move the camera and the color treatment, especially in the exterior part. I think the image in the interior of the house could have been worked a little more in terms of lighting and color.
The short film is fine and I am very pleasantly surprised that it is your first short film. Perhaps the most negative part would be the duration, I think the piece is a bit repetitive and perhaps because of that, the story loses a bit of force.
@jiajieyu yes, I am aware that indoor lighting is uninteresting, I will learn that in my next course also in domestic.
It is shot in Seville, that scene of sunflowers with my mobile ... a surprise that it remained like this, the blur became a point in favor and with the teel and orange it was already a dream. Already devising the following ... I encourage you to do a second course😊😊😊
@elena_infante very interesting, the truth is that you shot it with a mobile phone and without a gimbal. It has a lot of merit, especially also the fact of taking advantage of something that a priori could seem like an error such as out of focus.
I'll give it a second thought to see if I can propose a course. Thanks for everything.
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jiajieyu
Teacher PlusThank you very much @elena_infante for sharing your work.
Where is this short film filmed? The location seems really beautiful to me. I think you have done a beautiful job, for poetic moments, especially in the part of the sunflower fields.
I liked how you move the camera and the color treatment, especially in the exterior part. I think the image in the interior of the house could have been worked a little more in terms of lighting and color.
The short film is fine and I am very pleasantly surprised that it is your first short film. Perhaps the most negative part would be the duration, I think the piece is a bit repetitive and perhaps because of that, the story loses a bit of force.
But in any case, congratulations on your work.
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@jiajieyu yes, I am aware that indoor lighting is uninteresting, I will learn that in my next course also in domestic.
It is shot in Seville, that scene of sunflowers with my mobile ... a surprise that it remained like this, the blur became a point in favor and with the teel and orange it was already a dream. Already devising the following ... I encourage you to do a second course😊😊😊
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Teacher Plus@elena_infante very interesting, the truth is that you shot it with a mobile phone and without a gimbal. It has a lot of merit, especially also the fact of taking advantage of something that a priori could seem like an error such as out of focus.
I'll give it a second thought to see if I can propose a course. Thanks for everything.
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