Very good project Daniel! Thank you very much for sharing it.
I was thinking of sending you comments but the truth is that I do not see much to say. Is it because there are only 3 characters? I do not know.
But from what there is, I see the style quite coherent, the characters have interesting and recognizable silhouettes, attitudes that give them personality and presence ...
It makes me want to see these characters in action. Maybe there we could comment on a couple of things, but for the moment, I have a very solid project, in this style.
Perhaps the only thing I would comment on is that I would recommend imagining how the short character is going to show his emotions. I think because the technology in your world allows it (the robot has digital eyes apparently), you could come up with a way to give digital expressions to its glasses. Unless you want it to be an expressionless character like Cyclope from XMen. But for something Cyclope is never the main character, it greatly reduces his ability to interact and our ability to connect with him.
If you want to discuss these details, let me know and we will gladly give you a while.
@jbfraisse Thank you very much for answering and for the feedback, I am very happy that you like them. The next step I want to do with the characters is to make a pose sheet and an expression card, since I created them through a briefing invented to make my portfolio. The idea of digital expressions seems great to me, I'm going to try it and create the anti Cyclope club jajja and finally of course I would love to talk about the details, it would be a pleasure, since I am at that point where I want to give a leap in quality and improve to enter the world of animation and I am somewhat lost.
A greeting and thank you very much again.
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jbfraisse
Teacher PlusVery good project Daniel! Thank you very much for sharing it.
I was thinking of sending you comments but the truth is that I do not see much to say. Is it because there are only 3 characters? I do not know.
But from what there is, I see the style quite coherent, the characters have interesting and recognizable silhouettes, attitudes that give them personality and presence ...
It makes me want to see these characters in action. Maybe there we could comment on a couple of things, but for the moment, I have a very solid project, in this style.
Perhaps the only thing I would comment on is that I would recommend imagining how the short character is going to show his emotions. I think because the technology in your world allows it (the robot has digital eyes apparently), you could come up with a way to give digital expressions to its glasses. Unless you want it to be an expressionless character like Cyclope from XMen. But for something Cyclope is never the main character, it greatly reduces his ability to interact and our ability to connect with him.
If you want to discuss these details, let me know and we will gladly give you a while.
Greetings and congratulations again.
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@jbfraisse Thank you very much for answering and for the feedback, I am very happy that you like them. The next step I want to do with the characters is to make a pose sheet and an expression card, since I created them through a briefing invented to make my portfolio. The idea of digital expressions seems great to me, I'm going to try it and create the anti Cyclope club jajja and finally of course I would love to talk about the details, it would be a pleasure, since I am at that point where I want to give a leap in quality and improve to enter the world of animation and I am somewhat lost.
A greeting and thank you very much again.
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elifsukoca
they're super cute
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