Your project was very good :)
I would only recommend a few things to improve it a bit.
Try to follow a single graphic line so that the video is integrated, in your animation you have 3 very different styles, the intro text, the pizza part and the timeline part and the closing, this makes your animation look like It is made by three different people.
IN the animation of the pizza face, take care of the times of the expressions, since all the time you have something animated and that makes it difficult to see what the character's expression is, it is preferable to see each expression more defined.
Thanks for your recommendations teacher @yimbo8 !! 100% recommended course !! Due to lack of time and software I could not get the story as I thought it in terms of technique. I would have liked not to take your files for my final project but at that time I did not have the AI program, for that reason the pizza is not vector. Also I don't have the option in AE CS6 to convert shapes layers to path with the consequent difficulty of working with masks (especially in infographic practice) or pulling technical resources. In short, I think I have acquired the knowledge I was looking for in the course and ... that's, in part, to your credit;)
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yimbo8
Teacher PlusYour project was very good :)
I would only recommend a few things to improve it a bit.
Try to follow a single graphic line so that the video is integrated, in your animation you have 3 very different styles, the intro text, the pizza part and the timeline part and the closing, this makes your animation look like It is made by three different people.
IN the animation of the pizza face, take care of the times of the expressions, since all the time you have something animated and that makes it difficult to see what the character's expression is, it is preferable to see each expression more defined.
I hope you liked the course and keep cheering.
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Thanks for your recommendations teacher @yimbo8 !! 100% recommended course !! Due to lack of time and software I could not get the story as I thought it in terms of technique. I would have liked not to take your files for my final project but at that time I did not have the AI program, for that reason the pizza is not vector. Also I don't have the option in AE CS6 to convert shapes layers to path with the consequent difficulty of working with masks (especially in infographic practice) or pulling technical resources. In short, I think I have acquired the knowledge I was looking for in the course and ... that's, in part, to your credit;)
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