Thanks Óscar for the course, very illustrative and interesting!
For the project, I have taken advantage of a close event of a loved one, so that it is not a famous person ... I have attached the original photo so you can see that I had to add part of the hair ... There was no better material .. .
In the image I have used a flower that is symbolic for us, I have added the 18th birthday and a reference to soccer, since it is the sport that she practices.
I await your corrections.
A greeting!
Hi Claudia, thanks to you! The composition is fine.
For telling you, I think you are missing hair on one side, highlight some parts of the line to give it more strength and that the shadows are too light and hardly noticeable. If you feel like it, you can post the images in the forum and I can make you some suggestions and corrections.
Cheers!
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dlixus
Thanks Óscar for the course, very illustrative and interesting!
For the project, I have taken advantage of a close event of a loved one, so that it is not a famous person ... I have attached the original photo so you can see that I had to add part of the hair ... There was no better material .. .
In the image I have used a flower that is symbolic for us, I have added the 18th birthday and a reference to soccer, since it is the sport that she practices.
I await your corrections.
A greeting!
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Staff PlusHi Claudia, thanks to you! The composition is fine.
For telling you, I think you are missing hair on one side, highlight some parts of the line to give it more strength and that the shadows are too light and hardly noticeable. If you feel like it, you can post the images in the forum and I can make you some suggestions and corrections.
Cheers!
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