Thanks for sharing your Kry project. The truth is that I do not have many comments to make. I see it very well, both in the dynamics of action and in the settings and cancellations that you have used. There are very expressive shots, which I think help a lot to accentuate the action.
The only thing I miss is the axis change. You have placed the frame on the camera axis many times, but you have not used this resource to change the direction of the action. Although the scene does not need it, it was one of the slogans raised.
Otherwise, very good work.
I tried to do the breaking of the axis in the first panel, by crossing the characters above the camera and thus crossing the axis, but it was never really clear to me. It was certainly the point where I was most hesitating.
I hope you have something clearer about the axes now. If not, ask all that is necessary. I'm glad you liked the course. I hope it has been useful to you. Greetings and thanks to you.
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pabloburatti
Teacher PlusThanks for sharing your Kry project. The truth is that I do not have many comments to make. I see it very well, both in the dynamics of action and in the settings and cancellations that you have used. There are very expressive shots, which I think help a lot to accentuate the action.
The only thing I miss is the axis change. You have placed the frame on the camera axis many times, but you have not used this resource to change the direction of the action. Although the scene does not need it, it was one of the slogans raised.
Otherwise, very good work.
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pabloburatti
Teacher PlusBy the way, forgive me for the delay in the return too. I hope you have enjoyed the course.
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krygarcia
Hi @pabloburatti ! Thank you for your comments!
I tried to do the breaking of the axis in the first panel, by crossing the characters above the camera and thus crossing the axis, but it was never really clear to me. It was certainly the point where I was most hesitating.
Great course, thank you very much!
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pabloburatti
Teacher PlusI hope you have something clearer about the axes now. If not, ask all that is necessary. I'm glad you liked the course. I hope it has been useful to you. Greetings and thanks to you.
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