You have applied the technique clean and without cuts, and in a quite peculiar environment!
Although the color you have used is a bit "TV1 New Year's Eve" the truth is that I like how it works, how you combine screens & shirt. The warm light on the model and the graceful attitude do the rest.
If I had to polish something, maybe I would focus on correcting the tilt of the roof and the window. The composition seems good to me, but when I look at the lines, the ceiling "falls" from right to left and the window also gives me the feeling of not going perpendicular to the floor, but somewhat skewed. I am also a bit distracted by the flare that you have simulated, the illuminated window already works for me without the flare itself (flare & light on model have different light inclinations)
Either way, congratulations on the photo @rvgancedo ! Removing the subject of the lines, you have taken a very nice and beautiful shot!
Already in childhood I liked the pictures of Catholic saints and the Eurovision festival :) I have retouched the inclinations; now they have a drop more like the old building in which I took the selfie. The truth, as I saw the photographs, I realized the mess of lines (beam, window, monitors ...) that I had gotten into, but it was too late to change projects. I acknowledge that the light flare was a beginner's mistake and I have corrected it as much as possible by dimming it and removing the light reflections.
It has been a profitable course that, beyond the technical knowledge acquired, has allowed me to see the photographic process from another point of view. Thank you very much for the comments and for the corrections you made to the project.
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Ibai
Teacher PlusGood @rvgancedo !
You have applied the technique clean and without cuts, and in a quite peculiar environment!
Although the color you have used is a bit "TV1 New Year's Eve" the truth is that I like how it works, how you combine screens & shirt. The warm light on the model and the graceful attitude do the rest.
If I had to polish something, maybe I would focus on correcting the tilt of the roof and the window. The composition seems good to me, but when I look at the lines, the ceiling "falls" from right to left and the window also gives me the feeling of not going perpendicular to the floor, but somewhat skewed. I am also a bit distracted by the flare that you have simulated, the illuminated window already works for me without the flare itself (flare & light on model have different light inclinations)
Either way, congratulations on the photo @rvgancedo ! Removing the subject of the lines, you have taken a very nice and beautiful shot!
A greeting!
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rvgancedo
Hi @Ibai .
Already in childhood I liked the pictures of Catholic saints and the Eurovision festival :) I have retouched the inclinations; now they have a drop more like the old building in which I took the selfie. The truth, as I saw the photographs, I realized the mess of lines (beam, window, monitors ...) that I had gotten into, but it was too late to change projects. I acknowledge that the light flare was a beginner's mistake and I have corrected it as much as possible by dimming it and removing the light reflections.
It has been a profitable course that, beyond the technical knowledge acquired, has allowed me to see the photographic process from another point of view. Thank you very much for the comments and for the corrections you made to the project.
Greetings.
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