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Il mio progetto del corso: Introduzione alla fotografia di strada
by Simona Angeretti @simolasimo
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E' il mio primo progetto di Domestika... ho cercato di rappresentare un viaggio, un sogno...
ho impostato Lightroom come consigliato, ma alcune foto non sono riuscite al meglio. mi è piaciuto sperimentare e ho trovato interessante preimpostare i livelli, per avere un lavoro abbastanza omogeneo... tutto ancora da sperimentare. ho caricato le foto in bassa risoluzione... il lavoro effettivo risulta meglio definito... devo ricaricare le foto con qualità migliore?
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gustavominas
Teacher PlusHi @simolasimo ! Thank you for taking the course and submitting your project.
The treatment I teach in Lightroom works mainly for RAW files, and as I mentioned, image processing is something completely personal, you have to look for what you like best. There is no right or wrong.
About the photos, I think the way you experimented and got out of the ordinary is excellent! This is already commendable.
I really like the reflection in the first one, and I think it's a good choice to start the series.
Next, you move on to 4 very abstract images. I think they all work, but I wouldn't put them in the same sequence within such a short series. Perhaps it would be more interesting to distance them further within the essay, alternating more concrete photos with these abstractions. But as I said, I thought the exercise was very good.
I really like the photo that follows, of the woman's face in the cloudy glass. My favorite. It is so good that I would leave out the next photo, just the wet glass, because it is small compared to the previous one.
Also very interesting are the reflections of the following photos, but again, I would leave only one in the essay, maybe the second.
And I don't really like the last photo, because it lacks the magic that you get in the previous photos, and you are "fighting" the light, as the outside of the bus is much brighter than the ladies.
Good job, congratulations!
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simolasimo
thank you very much for your suggestions. I see this month to implement the series and change from your valuable advice. can I re-post the project (maybe putting photos with better resolution)? also ... I did the post production with RAW, I know that your advice is an example, I really enjoyed using them, even if I was not able to reach your degree of "beauty" in the correction. I learned one more thing. I just have to perfect what I learned. thank you very much for everything 🙂
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idealtopfive
I feel dizzy from the pictures, great work
simolasimo
Thanks, I'm glad you liked them 🙂
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