Course project
Meu projeto do curso: Ilustração infantil: conte histórias com personagens e cenários
by Maria Eloiza Figueiredo @maria_eloiza5
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06hours
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47mins
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07secs
All courses at $5.99USD
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julinhamontenegro1602
Pluscool how creative!
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dnepwu
Teacher PlusAaaaah <3 <3 I loved the plot twist!! Very cool what you did with the story! Even with so few pages, he made a well-crafted story and was surprising those who thought they already knew! Not only the ending but even the inversion of the characters' personalities makes us curious to see where this will lead! ahaha loved it! I also loved the insertion of the new characters!
Some points I noticed to polish:
1) starts and ends with double pages, right? Remember we talked about the first and last page being, in practice, the same page? So they need to start and end with simple pages :/
2) the 13/14 pair has a different bleed: black lines instead of black bars, like the others. In fact, you can remove the bleed marks for posting. They matter more for the printing process only.
3) as you have a very soft, very organic line (which is charming), I think it would be cooler if you also used this line to make those more perfect circles and lines that you used to make some demarcations of the scenery and the wings of the butterfly. I think it's a really cool feature of your line and it makes everything more similar, cohesive, a visual unit.
But oh: congratulations!! project completed!! You are a storyteller. It changed everything, left it very authorial and a round plot that holds the reader! <3 <3
And thanks for taking the course!!
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maria_eloiza5
@dnepwu thank you 😻 I've been testing a few different styles, I've always drawn but I was starting with digital right away, now I have a pen to draw better lol, thank you so much for the answer, I'll definitely put it into practice
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maria_eloiza5
@julinhamontenegro1602 thank you S2
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