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Mi Proyecto del curso: Fotografía dark mood para proyectos gastronómicos
by Elsa López Fernández @elsalf
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He creado esta escena dark mood de unas galletas de avena utilizando una superficie de imitación a madera y fondo oscuro. Lo he combinado con distintos cuencos y platos que dieran una armonía de color a la escena.
Desde un ángulo frontal y también cenital. Con diferentes encuadres y variaciones en la colocación de los elementos.
He editado ligeramente las fotos en lightroom para oscurecer las sombras.
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dacilfernandez
Teacher PlusElsa, what a beautiful project you have presented, I loved it !!
The focus is perfect, highlighting the protagonist of the scene and blurring the rest of the elements.
The light in the photo creates a very special atmosphere in the images, and again the cookies take center stage.
The color palette continues to add to that warm and "cozy" atmosphere you've created.
The composition of the plate with the cookies seen from above in the zenith is wonderful, it is so well created that it makes you stare at the plate for a long time appreciating how each element is placed.
The storytelling of the photo takes you to that warmth that I was talking about earlier.
And the edition continues to enhance all this environment, in a very beautiful and elegant way.
Also, I really appreciate that your project is nothing like mine, bravo for that!
Perhaps the only thing that I could tell you to make your project perfect, would be the separation that it would make of some elements, such as:
-In the last photo, I would take the cookie jar a little more out of the plane, and throw it back a little. If you notice, it creates a mass too big and suffocates the photo a little.
-In some of the photos, in the front area, there are a couple of pieces of oatmeal that mislead a little and take away the air that you had left in that area. I would perhaps place them behind the plate rather than in front.
- And finally, returning to the composition of the elements on the plate seen from the top, I would move the cookie that is alone down a little, thus separating it a little more from the rest.
Congratulations Elsa for your project, keep it up, you have very good taste and your photos are beautiful !!
A hug,
Docile
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elsalf
Thank you very much for all your feedback and for your good words! I'm very happy coming from you :)
I will take into account those details that you comment, that I had not even noticed but once I look at them I can not stop seeing them haha The next photo I will pay much more attention to those little things so that everything fits much more.
Thank you very much Dácil !! have a nice day :)
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anke_morreel
Me encanta mucho! I didn't see the small details either, I really had to go back to the photo's. Well done, I hope to do as good as you!
elsalf
Thank you very much Anke! I'm sure your photos will look great :)
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constanzasandovaln
Divine!!!... really some photos that communicate a lot!
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