Olá Prof. Excelente treinamento.. Tirei os primeiros meses desse ano pra fazer diversos cursos na área. Em especial estudar WorkFlows, Luzes e Shader´s..
Very nice Eduardo! Congratulations! I see that you applied all of the techniques that are in the lessons. You have the basics. I love the way you see and create Cuba and Africa. Especially the Africa one, because it has a really nice abstract shape of Africa’s map. Nice cut too though on the spline mask. Also, I like the way you light the scenes, it is so simple and nice. It would be great that you can share your work in progress here with the students too, so they can learn. May be the camera lens that you used, how you made that shape of Africa’s map or how many lights did you use, etc.
My only input here will be in the concept part. It would be great that you can know the city or the events without putting the literal text. For example, the giraffe, the tree and the sun, they did explain that the image is about Africa. So, you don’t need to explain literally with the text. And, the missing parts that I see in Africa and cuba are the product that sells. In the cuba image, I see the guitar to explain that is about music in cuba. Is it a cocktail that you sell? May be, you can add more elements too like the music notes, trumpet, confetti etc to make the message clear.
In general, great work and keep it up. Thanks for choosing this course! And I’m happy that you learn something from this course.
@hunkydunky Hello Professor .. Thank you very much for the comment and the information ..
I really loved the way it illuminates Cena and his WorkFlow .. These were my expectations for the course and very well done ..
I created some other materials with the knowledge, I'm publishing on my Instagram .. I'm even participating in @36daysoftype from Adobe using some tools that I learned in your course.
I will redo all classes again, applying the product better .. (The Concept of Advertising) .. and I will publish here again.
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hunkydunky
Teacher PlusVery nice Eduardo! Congratulations! I see that you applied all of the techniques that are in the lessons. You have the basics. I love the way you see and create Cuba and Africa. Especially the Africa one, because it has a really nice abstract shape of Africa’s map. Nice cut too though on the spline mask. Also, I like the way you light the scenes, it is so simple and nice. It would be great that you can share your work in progress here with the students too, so they can learn. May be the camera lens that you used, how you made that shape of Africa’s map or how many lights did you use, etc.
My only input here will be in the concept part. It would be great that you can know the city or the events without putting the literal text. For example, the giraffe, the tree and the sun, they did explain that the image is about Africa. So, you don’t need to explain literally with the text. And, the missing parts that I see in Africa and cuba are the product that sells. In the cuba image, I see the guitar to explain that is about music in cuba. Is it a cocktail that you sell? May be, you can add more elements too like the music notes, trumpet, confetti etc to make the message clear.
In general, great work and keep it up. Thanks for choosing this course! And I’m happy that you learn something from this course.
eduardojocum
Plus@hunkydunky Hello Professor .. Thank you very much for the comment and the information ..
I really loved the way it illuminates Cena and his WorkFlow .. These were my expectations for the course and very well done ..
I created some other materials with the knowledge, I'm publishing on my Instagram .. I'm even participating in @36daysoftype from Adobe using some tools that I learned in your course.
I will redo all classes again, applying the product better .. (The Concept of Advertising) .. and I will publish here again.
Thank you so much
My insta: https://www.instagram.com/eduardoferri_ef/
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