@ahlam88_1, it looks a nice project with elegant design applications, but, I must say, it is not a very careful and neat job, although we can't see the entire pages. I find inconsistencies in white lines breaks in paragraphs styles (sometimes there are two lines, sometimes, three; and other times, just one line break). You used a bullet paragraph style badly because you applied it even in white lines, and the sidebar title! Why a white empty line instead of a top or bottom margin attribute?
Talking about design aesthetics —not technical considerations— you have very narrowed columns that difficult reading, the sidebar background color is too wide so crashes other text columns. Conversely, pictures need to expand horizontally, so they can match to any vertical structures like columns o gutter lines.
I deeply encourage you to make another try in this project, more accurate, delicate and sensitive to the beauty of form and typography. Seeing your whole design result, I'm pretty sure that you can achieve it; You just need to go step by step slowly so You can assimilate the knowledge and methodology and be sure that your style decisions are honored by your execution.
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@ahlam88_1, it looks a nice project with elegant design applications, but, I must say, it is not a very careful and neat job, although we can't see the entire pages. I find inconsistencies in white lines breaks in paragraphs styles (sometimes there are two lines, sometimes, three; and other times, just one line break). You used a bullet paragraph style badly because you applied it even in white lines, and the sidebar title! Why a white empty line instead of a top or bottom margin attribute?
Talking about design aesthetics —not technical considerations— you have very narrowed columns that difficult reading, the sidebar background color is too wide so crashes other text columns. Conversely, pictures need to expand horizontally, so they can match to any vertical structures like columns o gutter lines.
I deeply encourage you to make another try in this project, more accurate, delicate and sensitive to the beauty of form and typography. Seeing your whole design result, I'm pretty sure that you can achieve it; You just need to go step by step slowly so You can assimilate the knowledge and methodology and be sure that your style decisions are honored by your execution.
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