Hello Julian! Very nice piece! I want to know in depth what these things mean for the character. I think the themes need to be spun together to create a single speech. How much her first victory influenced her love for polo, how the connection with her horse makes her a better rider, etc. But in general many congratulations! Of course, if you want more specific comments, we can talk about them whenever you want! Cheers
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romay
Teacher PlusHello Julian! Very nice piece! I want to know in depth what these things mean for the character. I think the themes need to be spun together to create a single speech. How much her first victory influenced her love for polo, how the connection with her horse makes her a better rider, etc. But in general many congratulations! Of course, if you want more specific comments, we can talk about them whenever you want! Cheers
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cristian7co
cool!
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