Hello @sebasriobo !
Congratulations! You are the first to publish a project of this course, which deserves a special decoration;)
In general, I see it well, you have solved the isometry very well and the narrative of the composition is ingenious.
I miss seeing some of the style tests to know the decisions you have made to get here. It would be interesting if you upload some image of the process. You can check in my project of the course the ideal way to present it. Which is always fundamental.
Regarding style, three comments:
1- There is a combination of more solid elements, with their variety of nuances to accentuate the volume (eg: the gray machine at the beginning) and other flat and linear elements (eg: the "room" at the end). It would be good if you unify the criteria so that they do not seem two separate styles.
2- The characters need a little more treatment. Perhaps adding shadows to reinforce the volume, or supporting shadows, and with that you help them to integrate better within the space
3- I'm not sure that the background with the rhombus pattern is helping a lot. I think it dirties the composition a bit and becomes a resource that you can do without to give the illustration more solidity. Maybe you can find an alternative solution.
Well that's for now! Hope this can help you.
A greeting!
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Mauco
Teacher PlusHello @sebasriobo !
Congratulations! You are the first to publish a project of this course, which deserves a special decoration;)
In general, I see it well, you have solved the isometry very well and the narrative of the composition is ingenious.
I miss seeing some of the style tests to know the decisions you have made to get here. It would be interesting if you upload some image of the process. You can check in my project of the course the ideal way to present it. Which is always fundamental.
Regarding style, three comments:
1- There is a combination of more solid elements, with their variety of nuances to accentuate the volume (eg: the gray machine at the beginning) and other flat and linear elements (eg: the "room" at the end). It would be good if you unify the criteria so that they do not seem two separate styles.
2- The characters need a little more treatment. Perhaps adding shadows to reinforce the volume, or supporting shadows, and with that you help them to integrate better within the space
3- I'm not sure that the background with the rhombus pattern is helping a lot. I think it dirties the composition a bit and becomes a resource that you can do without to give the illustration more solidity. Maybe you can find an alternative solution.
Well that's for now! Hope this can help you.
A greeting!
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I liked the course so much that I did another project.
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