Hi @degennaro_films , thanks for sharing your final project!
You have chosen to compress a situation (boxing training) into 30 seconds and I must say that you have managed to tell life in that gym in no time. Very well. Let me suggest a couple of things that will surely improve this video. The first is to be more daring from the middle to the end in the rhythm of the movie. All the shots are in slow motion, perhaps you could alternate shots in solo to shots at natural speed to break the rhythm of the narration and add more dynamism to the story. The music is a success, it takes you to the world of boxing thanks to its cinematographic references, I still miss some sound effects of boxing blow, jump rope, breathing, a gym environment sound ... all effects that you can easily find it on youtube. These sounds, together with the image and the music, will surely add more punch to your video;)
@giacomo_prestinari Thank you for your return !!! I'm glad you liked the video.
I will make the suggested changes (which seemed very lucid to me) and post it again, okay?
Hug!
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Hi @degennaro_films , thanks for sharing your final project!
You have chosen to compress a situation (boxing training) into 30 seconds and I must say that you have managed to tell life in that gym in no time. Very well. Let me suggest a couple of things that will surely improve this video. The first is to be more daring from the middle to the end in the rhythm of the movie. All the shots are in slow motion, perhaps you could alternate shots in solo to shots at natural speed to break the rhythm of the narration and add more dynamism to the story. The music is a success, it takes you to the world of boxing thanks to its cinematographic references, I still miss some sound effects of boxing blow, jump rope, breathing, a gym environment sound ... all effects that you can easily find it on youtube. These sounds, together with the image and the music, will surely add more punch to your video;)
@giacomo_prestinari Thank you for your return !!! I'm glad you liked the video.
I will make the suggested changes (which seemed very lucid to me) and post it again, okay?
Hug!
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