Proyecto de curso
My project in Female Character Design for Comics course
por Bangelier Vanel @roan_500
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i really appreciate your course it help improve my female character thanks a lot. Let me know what you think of my character. i'm french so excuse my english have a nice day or evening.
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the pose is too rigid. this kind of pose can work, of course. but try to look a pics of people placing their hands on hips.
that specific hand pose is tricky, so it helps if you use reference for that pose as well. see your own hand in the mirror.
also,
you need to place the head a bit better on the neck. maybe put it a bit more centered.
be careful with the hair lines almost touching the nose. it creates a tension that you can maybe avoid.
you need to place the eyes a bit better on the head as well. find pics of that specific angle and see how the eye would look on that position.
ink lines need more variation. maybe thinner lines on eyes, mouth nose and hair. and cape.
the grey tones you could use more variation as well. you need to define where the light is coming from. and then place the shadows using greys.
I like the costume and the details you added.
@marciotakara thank you for your time i'll try to correct what i did wrong and i will repost them thank you again have a nice day.
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