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Mi Proyecto del curso: Introducción al storyboarding
por Anett Sarahi González Leal @anett20
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Storyboard de un cortometraje de aproximadamente 1 minuto. Realizado por mi, guion hecho por mi hermano.
Sinopsis: Tomi Tomi es un pequeño mono que trabaja forzadamente en un circo y no es feliz con ello. En las noches, su único amigo Mr. mister, un conejo tuerto, suele visitarlo en las noches en su jaula y sueñan con la libertad.
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I like it. I think it's not super clear when the old banana comes in and then suddenly there is a new banana...apart from that it works. I would maybe have a shot where they pick up the keys before they leave (just adding more info) but it makes sense like that too. Also, instead of having a text saying the action (se aleja) I would have an extra drawing of the hand pushing it away. But then right after he pushes the banana away it is right next to his body..that's the only part I am not sure about with the narrative.
Good job with the different shots though!
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