@lauramazzoncini
Hello Laura! Congratulations on your project! Beautiful!
I really like the decision of how to show the city in the first illustration, I think it is very successful to tell the type of city that you want to present us. And the sequence is very good, I love that the characters appear in all the illustrations in different sizes and with different amounts of detail.
As a suggestion: The margins need to be adjusted, in all the illustrations there are elements that are very close to the edges and need a little more air.
Thanks for the backstage photos,
and thank you for sharing this space with me :)
I'm glad you're happy and I hope you really enjoyed the course.
a big hug!
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sallysanford
Love the circles! Love the friendship in end.
lauramazzoncini
@sallysanford Thanks Sally!! Hugs from Buenos Aires
estrellita_caracol
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Hello Laura! Congratulations on your project! Beautiful!
I really like the decision of how to show the city in the first illustration, I think it is very successful to tell the type of city that you want to present us. And the sequence is very good, I love that the characters appear in all the illustrations in different sizes and with different amounts of detail.
As a suggestion: The margins need to be adjusted, in all the illustrations there are elements that are very close to the edges and need a little more air.
Thanks for the backstage photos,
and thank you for sharing this space with me :)
I'm glad you're happy and I hope you really enjoyed the course.
a big hug!
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lynkalogirou
I love the colours and the compositions and the happy story! Congratulations!
lauramazzoncini
Thanks! Hugs from Argentina
lauramazzoncini
@estrellita_caracol Hello, just today I see your comment. Thanks for the suggestion. I'm still learning!! Immense hug 😘
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