The work turned out very well. It shows that you have practice in drawing because you achieved a depth that looks quite believable. You understand the concept of gray values and they help you create that depth that I mentioned earlier. You have the ability to create atmospheres that as a spectator transport me to the place you draw. All the words you mentioned are reflected in the drawing which shows your ability to communicate.
I especially like water. Those waves that die tired when they reach the shore and the shapes of the dinosaurs are precise. Very well achieved, I congratulate you.
A small detail in a personal capacity would be where you put the sun. I don't know if you would have used the golden ratio to place it (which is more or less a third of the surface) it would have been better. I feel like there is a little conflict between the head of the dinosaur and the sun that could have been avoided if the sun was somewhere else. Maybe this is very thin spinning as the work looks great.
In general, you have a skill that you have been refining in your work and it shows. I would give you advice to practice the human figure more, since some of the faces that I saw on your Instagram have a bit strange proportions. The human figure is also very difficult for me.
Congratulations and thank you for participating in the course. I'm glad to have helped you.
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rhinunez
Teacher PlusThe work turned out very well. It shows that you have practice in drawing because you achieved a depth that looks quite believable. You understand the concept of gray values and they help you create that depth that I mentioned earlier. You have the ability to create atmospheres that as a spectator transport me to the place you draw. All the words you mentioned are reflected in the drawing which shows your ability to communicate.
I especially like water. Those waves that die tired when they reach the shore and the shapes of the dinosaurs are precise. Very well achieved, I congratulate you.
A small detail in a personal capacity would be where you put the sun. I don't know if you would have used the golden ratio to place it (which is more or less a third of the surface) it would have been better. I feel like there is a little conflict between the head of the dinosaur and the sun that could have been avoided if the sun was somewhere else. Maybe this is very thin spinning as the work looks great.
In general, you have a skill that you have been refining in your work and it shows. I would give you advice to practice the human figure more, since some of the faces that I saw on your Instagram have a bit strange proportions. The human figure is also very difficult for me.
Congratulations and thank you for participating in the course. I'm glad to have helped you.
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