It is looking very good, congratulations!
I would adjust some things to make it fit you even better.
I think the title could come in faster and last less.
In the next scene, I think it takes a long time to reach the total number of videos and when it does, it lasts very little.
In the timeline scene I think the data needs to be illustrated, if you say that cat videos increase your energy levels, show it with an image. Try to have each point illustrated by what if they are not seen as random data.
In the ending scene I would make the character's movements a little faster so he doesn't feel so robotic.
Outside of that I like the idea of your video :)
I hope you liked the course!
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yimbo8
Teacher PlusIt is looking very good, congratulations!
I would adjust some things to make it fit you even better.
I think the title could come in faster and last less.
In the next scene, I think it takes a long time to reach the total number of videos and when it does, it lasts very little.
In the timeline scene I think the data needs to be illustrated, if you say that cat videos increase your energy levels, show it with an image. Try to have each point illustrated by what if they are not seen as random data.
In the ending scene I would make the character's movements a little faster so he doesn't feel so robotic.
Outside of that I like the idea of your video :)
I hope you liked the course!
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