I like very much! I point to things that maybe / I hope they serve you:
Good things:
1. The timing of the explosion joke replay works.
2. the overall idea is good
Things to review:
1. It is not necessary for you to be inspired or take things from my work, I am much more interested in seeing what new things can bring inspiration from other things. the timing and the idea you already have it - and it's the most difficult -
2. You could speed up the general timing a bit, some texts are long or you take pauses that are not necessary. you can shorten scenes. let everything go faster and faster as he makes mistakes he builds the stage for the joke. : D
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florazuldibujos
It's very cool! I congratulate you
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leo_miranda406
@florazuldibujos Thank you!
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carlosdanielrh4
Very funny!
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r_b
hahaha good!
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alexismoyano
Teacher PlusI like very much! I point to things that maybe / I hope they serve you:
Good things:
1. The timing of the explosion joke replay works.
2. the overall idea is good
Things to review:
1. It is not necessary for you to be inspired or take things from my work, I am much more interested in seeing what new things can bring inspiration from other things. the timing and the idea you already have it - and it's the most difficult -
2. You could speed up the general timing a bit, some texts are long or you take pauses that are not necessary. you can shorten scenes. let everything go faster and faster as he makes mistakes he builds the stage for the joke. : D
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leo_miranda406
@alexismoyano Thank you very much for the feedback!
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thispossiblebro
@leo_miranda406 hello on your youtubno channel there are no more videos I was expecting to see more of this type dr videos
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